The Best Club Penguin Stories

Ok so I added this page because when it was a page on Bodge’s site lots of people liked it. But they said the ending was cheesy, so I made a new one. Please tell me if you like it! 
It was a sunny day in club penguin. Interiordes3 looked out of the stone cold window to see the most beautiful penguin, with a name none other could match: ‘Chocolate746′. She gazed lovingly at him until he spotted her so she ran away and hid behind her red sofa. When she was sure that he was gone she dressed herself up in her bikini, sunglasses , flip flops and favorite wig and headed over to the beach.
To her surprise, Chocolate746 was there. He spotted her straight away and she shyly bowed her head and fiddled with her hair. When she once again rose her head she saw that he was walking over to her so, in a mix of shock and panic, she collapsed onto her beach towel. “Erm…excuse me?” he asked, tapping Des on her shoulder. “Hello!” Interiordes3 started to giggle for no apparent reason. “Right..I was wondering if I could..”
“If you could….” Interiordes3 interrupted.
“I could buy you a drink at the burger stand?”
“YES!! Well, I mean, err…..”
“Great! Come on over!” He gave a small and casual smile and Interiordes melted. “You’re so f…” She started, before she realised that everyone on the beach heard her. “F…f…fair! I mean your hair. It’s light!” She made up. “Right…” He gave her that smile again. She melted again.
Oh how she would remember that night! He took her to the Pizza Parlor, and they laughed at the same jokes, liked the same foods, they were a match made in heaven. The evening drew on and Interiordes3 just wanted more and more to tell him her true feelings about him, when she finally decided to tell him the truth. “Look, I..”
“You are beautiful. You look like your face was carved by angels and your skin was made by the finest silkworms in the world!” He said.
“You took the words right out of my mouth.” She replied, and as she leaned over to him and he leaned over to her every muscle in her body tensed and her heart beated so fast….
CRASH!!!!!! The earth beneath their feet started to shake and the tables started to fall over. Everyone gasped as a massive crack appeared in the wall.
“COME ON!” Chocolate shouted and they ran into the Town.
“In here!” Des pointed to the gift shop so they ran in. She huddled up to him in the corner while countless objects fell onto the floor. “I’m so scared!” The tears rolled down her cheeks and he wiped them away with his flipper. “It’ll be ok. Shhh……” Suddenly the desk fell down, almost crushing the manager. So they ran into the Town.
All of the entrances to different rooms were blocked. “WHAT DO WE DO? WE’RE GOING TO DIE!!” Interiordes sobbed. Suddenly the floor beneath Chocolate split in half and he fell in. Des ran to help him, her sweaty flippers grasping onto his, he was going to fall, he was going to fall……

New Ending

Chocolate’s hands were wet with sweat. “let go!” he shouted. “Save yourself!” 

“NO!! I LOVE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE IN THE WORLD AND I WILL NOT LET YOU DIE!!” Interiordes3 shouted back. She pulled harder and harder but without anyone else’s help she knew she could never make it. Tears streamed out of her eyes. She could not do it and she knew it. He was in pain. She had to put him out of his misery. ‘Just make his last moments the best in his life…’ she thought, and in a flash she leaned over, still holding on to him, and kissed him. He kissed her back. it lasted long and beautifully. Then she let go; Chocolate tumbled to his death. 

    The next day, Secret agents were investigating the earthquake. The crack seemed smaller in the daylight. She peered over the safety tape; there was Chocolate’s body lying cold and lifeless. She heard one penguin say “He must have fallen. At least we managed to pull his body out with the crane”. With a look of shock and anger, Interiordes3 jumped over the safety tape and down beside her love’s body. He was smiling. She smiled back with her eyes full of tears. She grabbed his body and jumped into the crack with him, falling to her death. But it was worth it; she had died with her one true love. 

The end 

Please comment below if you like the new ending!!